Update on-hold emails copy

includes/emails/class-wc-email-customer-on-hold-order.php

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if ( ! class_exists( 'WC_Email_Customer_On_Hold_Order', false ) ) :
 		 * @return string
 		 */
 		public function get_default_subject() {
-			return __( 'Your {site_title} order receipt from {order_date}', 'woocommerce' );
+			return __( 'Your {site_title} order has been received!', 'woocommerce' );
 		}
 
 		/**
@@ -97,7 +97,6 @@ if ( ! class_exists( 'WC_Email_Customer_On_Hold_Order', false ) ) :
 		/**
 		 * Get content html.
 		 *
-		 * @access public
 		 * @return string
 		 */
 		public function get_content_html() {
@@ -115,7 +114,6 @@ if ( ! class_exists( 'WC_Email_Customer_On_Hold_Order', false ) ) :
 		/**
 		 * Get content plain.
 		 *
-		 * @access public
 		 * @return string
 		 */
 		public function get_content_plain() {

templates/emails/customer-on-hold-order.php

@@ -10,26 +10,27 @@
  * happen. When this occurs the version of the template file will be bumped and
  * the readme will list any important changes.
  *
- * @see 	    https://docs.woocommerce.com/document/template-structure/
+ * @see https://docs.woocommerce.com/document/template-structure/
- * @author 		WooThemes
+ * @package WooCommerce/Templates/Emails
- * @package 	WooCommerce/Templates/Emails
+ * @version 3.5.0
- * @version     2.5.0
  */
 
 if ( ! defined( 'ABSPATH' ) ) {
 	exit;
 }
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::email_header() Output the email header
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_header', $email_heading, $email ); ?>
 
-<p><?php _e( "Your order is on-hold until we confirm payment has been received. Your order details are shown below for your reference:", 'woocommerce' ); ?></p>
+<?php /* translators: %s: Customer first name */ ?>
+<p><?php printf( __( 'Hi %s,', 'woocommerce' ), $order->get_first_name() ); ?></p><?php // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput.OutputNotEscaped ?>
+<p><?php _e( 'Thanks for your order. It’s on-hold until we confirm that payment has been received. In the meantime, here’s a reminder of what you ordered:', 'woocommerce' ); ?></p><?php // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput ?>
 
 <?php
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::order_details() Shows the order details table.
  * @hooked WC_Structured_Data::generate_order_data() Generates structured data.
  * @hooked WC_Structured_Data::output_structured_data() Outputs structured data.
@@ -37,18 +38,24 @@ do_action( 'woocommerce_email_header', $email_heading, $email ); ?>
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_order_details', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_text, $email );
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::order_meta() Shows order meta data.
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_order_meta', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_text, $email );
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::customer_details() Shows customer details
  * @hooked WC_Emails::email_address() Shows email address
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_customer_details', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_text, $email );
 
-/**
+?>
+<p>
+<?php _e( 'We look forward to fulfilling your order soon.', 'woocommerce' ); // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput ?>
+</p>
+<?php
+
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::email_footer() Output the email footer
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_footer', $email );

templates/emails/plain/customer-on-hold-order.php

@@ -10,23 +10,24 @@
  * happen. When this occurs the version of the template file will be bumped and
  * the readme will list any important changes.
  *
- * @see 	    https://docs.woocommerce.com/document/template-structure/
+ * @see https://docs.woocommerce.com/document/template-structure/
- * @author		WooThemes
+ * @package WooCommerce/Templates/Emails/Plain
- * @package 	WooCommerce/Templates/Emails/Plain
+ * @version 3.5.0
- * @version		2.5.0
  */
 
 if ( ! defined( 'ABSPATH' ) ) {
 	exit;
 }
 
-echo "= " . $email_heading . " =\n\n";
+echo '= ' . $email_heading . " =\n\n"; // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput.OutputNotEscaped
 
-echo __( "Your order is on-hold until we confirm payment has been received. Your order details are shown below for your reference:", 'woocommerce' ) . "\n\n";
+/* translators: %s: Customer first name */
+echo sprintf( __( 'Hi %s,', 'woocommerce' ), $order->get_first_name() ) . "\n\n"; // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput.OutputNotEscaped
+echo __( 'Thanks for your order. It’s on-hold until we confirm that payment has been received. In the meantime, here’s a reminder of what you ordered:', 'woocommerce' ) . "\n\n"; // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput.OutputNotEscaped
 
 echo "=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=\n\n";
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::order_details() Shows the order details table.
  * @hooked WC_Structured_Data::generate_order_data() Generates structured data.
  * @hooked WC_Structured_Data::output_structured_data() Outputs structured data.
@@ -36,17 +37,19 @@ do_action( 'woocommerce_email_order_details', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_tex
 
 echo "\n=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=\n\n";
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::order_meta() Shows order meta data.
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_order_meta', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_text, $email );
 
-/**
+/*
  * @hooked WC_Emails::customer_details() Shows customer details
  * @hooked WC_Emails::email_address() Shows email address
  */
 do_action( 'woocommerce_email_customer_details', $order, $sent_to_admin, $plain_text, $email );
 
+_e( 'We look forward to fulfilling your order soon.', 'woocommerce' ); // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput
+
 echo "\n=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=\n\n";
 
-echo apply_filters( 'woocommerce_email_footer_text', get_option( 'woocommerce_email_footer_text' ) );
+echo apply_filters( 'woocommerce_email_footer_text', get_option( 'woocommerce_email_footer_text' ) ); // phpcs:ignore WordPress.XSS.EscapeOutput